Class+comments+for+Heat+and+Dust+Commentary

**Knowledge:** solid, but could be more comprehensive (ie novel constructed through a series of letters and journals)


 * Interpretation:** needs to be deeper; address language of selected text more thoroughly


 * Appreciation of Literary Features**: some, but must explain HOW they function


 * Presentation:** generally progressive rather than simply compartmentalized; usually context supplied for selected text; however, sometimes too much focus on one idea rather than multiple ones (ie characterization, theme, etc)


 * Language**: some excellent vocabulary; others too informal or colloquial; several mechanical issues, particularly spelling